David Alpaugh

61

– E.E. Cummings –

 

1.-Up-So-Floating-Many-Bell

 

        anyone lived in a pretty how town

        (with up so floating many bells down)

        spring summer autumn winter

        he sang his didn’t he danced his did.

         

        Women and men(both little and small)

        cared for anyone not at all

        they sowed their isn’t they reaped their same

        sun moon stars rain

         

        children guessed(but only a few

        and down they forgot as up they grew

        autumn winter spring summer)

        that noone loved him more by more

         

        when by now and tree by leaf

        she laughed his joy she cried his grief

        bird by snow and stir by still

        anyone’s any was all to her

        someones married their everyones

        laughed their cryings and did their dance

        (sleep wake hope and then) they

        said their nevers they slept their dream

         

        stars rain sun moon

        (and only the snow can begin to explain

        how children are apt to forget to remember

        with up so floating many bells down)

         

        one day anyone died i guess

        (and noone stooped to kiss his face)

        busy folk buried them side by side

        little by little and was by was

         

        all by all and deep by deep

        and more by more they dream their sleep

        noone and anyone earth by april

        wish by spirit and if by yes.

         

        Women and men(both dong and ding)

        summer autumn winter spring

        reaped their sowing and went their came

        sun moon stars rain

If E.E. Cummings’ poem 61 (from his book 100 Poems) strikes us as hauntingly beautiful and highly original it’s because he departed radically from poetry as usual in crafting it.

 

Ordinarily, poets use metaphor to move from the specific to the generic or universal; but the world Cummings creates in poem 61 and the people who live in it are merrily lacking in specificity.

 

Cummings’ poem-scape has a fairy tale / nursery rhyme air. Everything in his pretty how town is in motion. There’s bodily motion (singing, dancing, sowing, reaping, laughing, crying, loving); and mental motion (guessing, wishing, hoping, remembering, forgetting, dreaming). The sound of floating bells radiates music up and down , in all directions.

 

The inhabitants of anyone ’s town include his love noone, along with unspecified someones and everyones , women and men (both little and small) , and children . Noone and anyone fall in love, marry, procreate, grow old, until one day

 

        anyone died i guess

        (and noone stooped to kiss his face)

2.-Anyone's-Deah-cr

busy folk buried them side by side…

 

If everything is generic, why are we so affected, so saddened by the death of two nobodies in stanza seven? Is it not because we suddenly break free from the generic, feeling that not no one, but an emotionally involved individual stooped with tenderness to kiss her beloved’s face, and that her grief was so great she soon joined him in death?

 

Wallace Stevens says, “ Poetry is abstraction bloodied .” Cummings may begin his poem by giving us the abstract side of a metaphor; but when we look at it again we realize that he is bloodying abstraction with specificity nurtured by noone ’s unconditional love for anyone (whose any was all to her ). Their love makes their how town pretty . Spring and summer radiate warmth; autumn sheds leaves from trees each year and april returns them; winter ’s snow causes birds to fly south.

 

Noone and anyone may feel generic at first. But many parents name children May or April, Leo or Glen. The fact that Frank Zappa named his daughter Moon did not mean that she was not a specific one-time-only individual. When Frank spoke her name he was surely thinking of his daughter, rather than an object that appears nightly in the sky.

 

Cummings makes his lovers feel real by giving them emotion. Anyone sang his didn’t and danced his did. Noone laughed anyone’s joy and cried his grief. Both are distinguished from the unenlightened,  conventional men and women (both little and small) who sowed their isn’t and reaped their same and cared for anyone not at all . Despite what their names suggest, anyone and noone stand out as individuals from the someones and everyones that surround them.

 3.-Everyone-cr

 

Cummings has created a flickering metaphor. On the abstract side where no one stooped to kiss his face anyone is forgotten. Still, we remember that in the world-that-once-was, an individual named noone did stoop; was profoundly saddened by her lover’s death; died of grief; and was buried with her mate.

 

****

 

T.S. Eliot imagined an aesthetic universe wherein poets living and dead continue to speak to one another through their verse. I wonder if E.E. Cummings was carrying on such a conversation with Gerald Manley Hopkins via that poet’s famous poem:

 

        Spring and Fall to a Young Child :

         

        Márgarét, áre you gríeving

        Over Goldengrove unleaving?

        Leáves like the things of man, you

        With your fresh thoughts care for, can you?

        Ah! ás the heart grows older

        It will come to such sights colder

        By and by, nor spare a sigh

        Though worlds of wanwood leafmeal lie;

        And yet you wíll weep and know why.

        Now no matter, child, the name:

        Sórrow’s spríngs áre the same.

        Nor mouth had, no nor mind, expressed

        What heart heard of, ghost guessed:

        It ís the blight man was born for,

        It is Margaret you mourn for.

A child subconsciously intuits her mortality as autumn leaves fall from trees. Hopkins knows that, although she is too young to put it into words, Margaret is sensing her own mortality and mourning for herself.

 

Autumn leaves are also coupled with grief in Cumming’s poem, wherein noone shares anyone’s grief over leaf fall.  

 

        when by now and tree by leaf

        she laughed his joy she cried his grief

 

The present disappearing into the past in when by now makes it clear that, here too, unleafing is a metaphor for mortality. Still, if Hopkins poem focuses on the grief our knowledge of mortality brings, Cummings reminds him and us that bare trees will sprout leaves again. Acceptance of our place in life’s cycle allows us to assuage grief and sorrow with joy and laughter.

 

Hopkins knows that by the time Margaret is an adult her intuitive fresh thoughts of childhood will have declined:

 

        Ah! ás the heart grows older

        It will come to such sights colder

        By and by, nor spare a sigh

        Though worlds of wanwood leafmeal lie…

        And yet you will weep and know why.

 

Both sadness over falling leaves and grief for a loved one dying are included in such sights. As an adult Margaret will no longer spare a sigh over yet another autumn; and she will know why she grieves for the loss of a father, mother, or lover; but her intuitive feeling of mortality, will have vanished.

 

Cummings knows that as noone ’s and anyone ’s children grow up they will lose the childhood sense they once had for the parental love that brought them into the world:

 

        children guessed (but only a few

        and down they forgot as up they grew

        autumn winter spring summer)

        that noone loved him more by more

 

****

 

Because they accept their role in the natural cycle anyone and noone are Cummings’ hero and heroine. They know they have been inextricably wafted into the structure of existence.They appreciate the gift of life, knowing they must one day give way to others waiting for their lives to begin. They answer the question Mary Oliver poses to readers in the concluding lines of her poem “The Summer Day.”

 

        Tell me, what do you plan to do 

        with your wild and precious life?

 

Anyone and noone are dead; but unlike their wholly generic brethren they sang their didn’t and danced their did , refusing to sow their isn’t and reap their same . They lived life fully, accepting both its joys and sorrows. Was by was , their when was filled with nows; their wish by spirit ; and their if by yes .

 

 4.-SunStarsMoon-Rain-cr

 sun        moon         stars        rain

 

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David Alpaugh ’s newest collection of poetry is Seeing the There There  (Word Galaxy Press, 2023). Alpaugh’s visual poems have been appearing monthly in Scene4 since February 2019. He lives in the San Francisco Bay Area where he has been a finalist for Poet Laureate of California. For more of his poetry, plays, and articles , check the Archives.
 

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