Although Amanda Shaw has been writing poetry for many years and holds
an MFA from Warren Wilson College, her debut collection, It Will Have
Been So Beautiful, has only now been released. Whatever the reason for
the delay, the book is a stunner.
A poem acting as a preface, “And the stars,” looks out into the universe,
and takes note of its beauty as well as humanity’s aspiration to know its
secrets: “In and out of the pull of Saturn, towards/a ribbon-thin gap in its
majestic rings//Cassini flies through full-fathomed dark/in a
choreographed series of turns.” At the same time, the poet expresses the
fear of the possible climate disasters awaiting us on Earth: “Headlines
today, beside the newest record heat,/of a possible second genesis” and
closes the poem on a prayer for some kind of earthly salvation. “Another
arc, oh dome of the sky,/may it be far enough//from each day’s loss. From
the lupine and the fireweed,/the fleet trail of the flight//of every winged
bird of every kind.”
This short poem, with its graceful movement between ideas and images, its
simple but rich language, its complexity of thought sets the tone for the
entire collection.
Another poem further into the book, perfectly exemplifies the poet’s skill in
moving effortlessly between past and present while also looking
apprehensively toward the future, weaving the historical and social with
the personal.
“You Don’t Need a Weatherman
to tell you that it’s hotter than the Summer
of Love. After they cut back the old forest,
the brook in Stowe that used to turn
my mother’s skin scarlet from shock
began to sun itself….//
‘The War was so big
we didn’t know what to do,’ says a weathered
Mark Rudd….
and after a century of New York’s trash
a landfill in the Meadowlands has grown so hot
it’s frying birds.”
In the activist 60s, the issues seemed so clear, while now the looming
climate catastrophe can seem so hopeless—the contrast is rendered quietly
and beautifully here, as is the passage of time itself, leading to a poignant
and heartbreaking conclusion.
“Mark Rudd’s
a math teacher in the desert. My husband says
aren’t you glad no child of yours
will ask if you were pretty once, as I asked my mom
when I was nine—no child of mine
will have to guess which way the wind is blowing
by its foul small. No one to throw my ashes
in the brook my mother loved, becoming a river of fire.”
In “Where We Are” the poet turns to ekphrasis to examine the need to
write:
“’And it was all I had, so I drew it,’
said Elsie Driggs. Clifford Still,
pictured here with all his paint,
said “I never wanted color to be color.’//
I want words to be words
the way my cat wants a shifting patch of light to be a bird
she’ll never catch.”
The desire to express through art and the near-impossibility of fully
succeeding have rarely been so well expressed.
The poems in this collection are so rich and complex, they resist simple
summation, so I’ll quote a few more passages to give a sense of the
powerful and beautiful language one finds throughout.
“The so-called waggle dance
confused me at first,
why above her honeycomb a bee
will move for up to one hundred circuits,
wagging her pointy rump
in a perfect figure 8.//
Still, given a choice, I’d hold with the guy
who guessed they danced for joy.
Let them return to flowers they’ve seen:
no bee is going to the moon.”
(“Dance, Dance, Evolution”)
“When Peleg asked Ishmael What do you see?
the sailor answered in truth: Nothing
but water. A nautical maven, still
Melville mistook under weigh
for underway, switched momentum
and weight. or made them the same,
the captain-heavy ship
weathered by salt and grit,
but surpassing her elders even then,
proud to go down in the strafing storms
of winter, always ahead on the prow.”
(“Nothing but Water”)
Writing of her cat:
“Though not gifted with a range of sound
she lets us know with her clean tongue.
You’ll never own your lives as I do mine,
however well you open doors.”
(“Felis Felix”)
A keen intelligence and a deft hand with words inform this entire collection
. An auspicious debut and one well worth adding to your library of poetry.
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