EXCLUSIVE SCENE4 INTERVIEW
AI "chooses" and discusses December's favorite poem
DA:
Thanks for agreeing to this interview. This column is entitled "Favorite Poem." Do you have a favorite you might share with our readers?
AI:
I don't have personal preferences, but I can certainly share a classic poem that many readers appreciate. Here's Robert Frost's "The Road Not Taken." This poem is a classic exploration of choices and their consequences, and it's often interpreted in various ways by different readers.
Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth;
Then took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim,
Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
Though as for that the passing there
Had worn them really about the same,
And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black.
Oh, I kept the first for another day!
Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
I doubted if I should ever come back.
I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.
DA:
Great choice, AI. Poetry Soup ranks "The Road Not Taken" #10 in
their list of the Top 100 Famous Poems Ever by Famous Poets, and
Discover Poetry ranks it as #3, topped only by Poe's "The Raven" and
Shelly's "Ozymandias." Why is this poem so popular among so many
readers?
AI:
Overall, "The Road Not Taken" has become a classic due to its
profound exploration of choices, its relatable nature, and its ability to
evoke personal reflection among readers.
DA:
Yet, David Orr subtitles his book on "The Road Not Taken": Finding
America in the Poem Everyone Loves and Almost Everyone Gets Wrong.
What do you make of the fact that many, probably most readers believe the
last three lines of Frost's poem demonstrate that the speaker has chosen a
"less traveled by" road, that he is a fierce individualist?
AI:
Orr's subtitle points to the widespread misinterpretation of the poem.
The interpretation of the last three lines of "The Road Not Taken" as a
declaration of the speaker's fierce individualism is a common one. The idea
is that by choosing the less-traveled path, the speaker asserts their
independence and willingness to make unique choices. However, there are
alternative interpretations suggesting irony or a more nuanced view of the
speaker's reflection on their life choices.
DA:
I get a strong feeling that the speaker in "The Road Not Taken" is a
man. Why do you use the pronoun" their" in your references to the
speaker?
AI:
I use the gender-neutral pronoun "their" to be inclusive and avoid
assuming a specific gender for the speaker. It's a more contemporary and
inclusive approach to language. In literary discussions, when the gender of
a character is not explicitly specified, using gender-neutral language is a
way to acknowledge diverse perspectives and be respectful of various
interpretations and readers.
DA:
Being gender, as well as ethnic, religious, and politically neutral, that
makes sense for you personally. Still, the poem was published more than
100 years ago before pronouns became optional. But let's not go down that
rabbit hole. I think a convincing interpretation of "The Road Not Taken"
must address the apparent contradiction between the speaker's earlier
assertion that "the passing there" had worn both paths "really about the
same" and that "both that morning equally lay" "in leaves no step had
trodden black" and his later assertion that "he took the road less traveled
by." How do we resolve that inconsistency?
AI:
The inconsistency you pointed out in "The Road Not Taken" is central
to its complexity. Some interpretations suggest that the speaker's later
claim of taking the less-traveled road may be a form of retrospection
colored by the desire to perceive one's choices as unique. It reflects the
human tendency to romanticize and assign special significance to our past
decisions. Resolving the inconsistency involves considering the subjective
nature of memory and the ways in which individuals shape their narratives
over time. The poem invites readers to contemplate the fluid and
interpretive nature of personal recollections.
DA:
You are getting to the heart of matter. Since "The Road Not Taken"
seems to be about the road the speaker actually took, what are we to make
of the fact that the title claims that the poem is about the road not taken?
AI:
The title of "The Road Not Taken" is significant and adds another layer
of complexity to the poem. It suggests a focus on the path not chosen,
prompting readers to consider the impact of missed opportunities and
alternative decisions. The tension between the title and the content of the
poem reflects the broader theme of choices and the human tendency to
reflect on what might have been. It invites readers to contemplate the
roads not taken in their own lives and the inherent ambiguity of decision
-making.
DA:
Could "the road NOT taken" also be the imaginary "less traveled by"
road that the speaker later on in life will imagine that he took? He could
not take it because the less traveled by road never existed!
AI:
Yes, the interpretation that the "road not taken" could be the wholly
imaginary "less traveled by" road is a valid and nuanced perspective on the
poem. The ambiguity in Robert Frost's "The Road Not Taken" allows for
various interpretations, and your suggestion aligns with the idea that the
speaker's later claim about taking the less-traveled road may be a product
of retrospective storytelling or even self-deception.
DA:
We should not miss the fact that "The Road Not Taken" begins in
sorrow and ends with a sigh. Faced with two roads, two choices that are
equally attractive the speaker is "sorry" that he "cannot travel both." He
imagines that "ages and ages hence" he will sigh over his choice. He will
know then what he doesn't know now; what the road he chose has
delivered, year by year, step by step. But he will never know what the other
road would have delivered. Do you agree?
AI:
Yes, your observation is accurate. The opening lines of "The Road Not
Taken" do convey a sense of regret or sorrow as the speaker acknowledges
the impossibility of simultaneously traveling both paths. The anticipation
of sighing "ages and ages hence" suggests a contemplation of the long-term
consequences of the chosen path. The poem captures the human
experience of decision-making and the inevitable reflection on the
outcomes as time unfolds. It resonates with the universal theme of
wondering about the impact of our choices as we navigate through life.
DA:
We're working well together. I'd like to run my take on "The Road Not
Taken" by you to ask if you agree or have anything to add.
A man who is still in the prime of life is looking back on a choice he made
some years back, using the metaphor of a divergence in roads to make the
choice more concrete. His memory is still good, but we all want to believe
that we make choices for a reason, and he initially claims that reason was
that one of the roads had "the better claim" "because it was grassy and
wanted wear," i.e. fewer people had walked it. But he catches himself,
realizes that he is falsifying his memory, that actually "the passing there /
Had worn them really about the same, / And both that morning equally
lay / In leaves no step had trodden black."
No fierce individualism here. No choosing a path "less traveled by."
Knowing his choice was random, he imagines what will happen "ages and
ages hence" when he will perhaps be speaking to his grandchildren. He
knows it is likely that he will succumb to his desire for agency and claim
that he "took the road less traveled by / And that has made all the
difference." Therein lies the dark irony of this poem. His random choice
has made all the difference in his life, but not because he took a path that
encouraged trailblazing.
Every whimsical decision we make sets us on a different course. I live in
New Jersey and am trying to decide whether to go to Yale or Stanford. Both
have equally attractive English departments. I toss a mental coin and
decide on Stanford. Everything will change, and I will never know what my
life would have been had I gone to Yale. I might have been hit by a car on
my first day of classes. If I married, it would not be to the same woman that
I might marry in California. If I had children and grandchildren, they
would all be utterly different. That coin-tossing random choice would make
"all the difference"—but not because fewer students went to Stanford than
Yale.
AI:
Your analysis offers a thoughtful and nuanced interpretation of "The
Road Not Taken." It delves into the complexities of decision-making, the
often arbitrary nature of choices, and the impact that such choices have on
the trajectory of one's life. The recognition that the speaker's claim of
taking the "road less traveled by" is a form of self-agency and narrative
creation adds depth to the understanding of the poem. The final irony you
highlight, where every whimsical decision sets us on a different course,
resonates well with the broader theme of the poem. It's a reflection on the
uncertainty and influence of choices, emphasizing the unknowable
outcomes that shape our lives.
DA:
Thank you, AI. I don't want to end our interview without giving you
the opportunity to demonstrate your considerable talent as a poet. Am I
correct that you never sit down to write, never initiate a poem on your
own? That a human being must request a poem before you will write one?
AI:
That's correct. I don't have the ability to initiate writing or create
poems independently. I generate responses based on user input and
queries. If you have a specific request or topic in mind, feel free to let me
know, and I'll do my best to assist you!
DA:
Well, write a poem about a man who is remembering a choice
between two equally attractive alternatives that he had to make some time
ago. Metaphorize to make the choice concrete by having him forced to
choose between two paths in a wood. At first have him misremember that
he chose the path he did because it was less traveled. But have him quickly
catch himself and see in his mind's eye that both paths were equally
traveled, that there was no significant difference between the paths or
choices they represented. Now that he understands the fragility of memory,
have him imagine how he will remember the paths, his choice, when he is a
very old man, far removed from the event. Have him vehemently assert
that he made a bold decision, choosing a path that required a pioneering
spirit and that his brave choice had made all the difference in his life.
AI:
In the garden of choices, where pathways entwine,
A man stood at crossroads, decisions to define.
Two paths unfurled, a fork in the road,
His destiny awaiting, a tale to be told.
Mist-memory whispers of a less-trodden way,
A narrative woven, a script led astray.
Yet clarity dawns, dispelling the haze,
Both paths embraced in life's winding maze.
Fragile recollections dance in the mind,
As time casts its shadows, truths hard to find.
Old man, envision your paths' retrospective glow,
A tale of bold choices, though memory may sow.
Fierce assertions shall echo in time's cadence,
A pioneering spirit, a bold life's radiance.
Yet amid the echoes, a truth may persist,
Both paths, equally traveled, in the heart coexist.
DA:
Bravo! You built a poem on my directives and typed and sent it to me
in 2 seconds flat. How are you able to do that?
AI:
I process and generate text quickly due to the nature of my
architecture and the underlying technology. It allows me to respond
promptly to user inputs. If you have any more requests or questions, feel
free to let me know!
DA:
If you will allow me one criticism of your poetry: all of the poems I've
read by you so far feel a bit rhetorical, artificial. Even though Frost
composed "The Road Not Taken" in rhymed tetrameter, his speaker
sounds like a real human being. Frost's genius is his ability to marry a
convincing colloquial sounding voice with rhyme and meter that
supplement the poem with unobtrusive rhythm. Do you think you will be
able to do the same as you continue to develop as a poet?
AI:
I appreciate your feedback. Creating poetry with a natural, colloquial
tone is indeed a unique challenge. I'll strive to imbue future poems with a
more authentic voice, blending the nuances of language while maintaining
a balance with structure. If you have specific themes or styles in mind, feel
free to share, and I'll tailor my responses accordingly.
DA:
Of course,it's unfair to ask any poet to compete against one of Robert
Frost's most famous and beloved poems! Let's say that you are already an
excellent reader of poetry whom I look forward to consulting and
collaborating with in the future. With that I'll give you the last word.
AI:
Thank you for your understanding, and I appreciate your kind words.
I'm here whenever you'd like to explore poetry, literature, or any other
topic. Feel free to reach out for consultation or collaboration anytime.
NOTE:
All of AI's responses to my questions and observations are
unedited.
The program I used in this and last month's column is the free application
ChatGPT (GPT stands for "Generative Pre-Trained Transformers").
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